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by enewmeyer
March 10th, 2011, 8:24 pm
Forum: Queries
Topic: Query: Divisions REVISED
Replies: 7
Views: 1066

Re: Query: Divisions REVISED

Just a question, but what life changing decisions do they need to make and what necessitates them? Right now, the query seems to be all about the set up to the situation they each find themselves in. I'd like to know more about the conflict and the choices they make. Also, what genre is this?
by enewmeyer
March 10th, 2011, 11:30 am
Forum: Queries
Topic: Query - Gentlemen Only, Ladies Forbidden
Replies: 12
Views: 2487

Re: Query - Gentlemen Only, Ladies Forbidden

The first paragraph of your new version totally hooked me! I agree with the others. The second paragraph could be tightened. Keep up the good work!
by enewmeyer
March 10th, 2011, 8:44 am
Forum: Queries
Topic: FYI You guys are AWESOME!
Replies: 10
Views: 1537

Re: FYI You guys are AWESOME!

Congrats! I hope everyone else will be as lucky as you!
by enewmeyer
March 10th, 2011, 12:26 am
Forum: Queries
Topic: Query: REDEMPTION FOR LIARS - Edited
Replies: 11
Views: 1851

Query: REDEMPTION FOR LIARS - Edited

I have two versions of my query letter but am unsure of which would be the best one to send out. Please be brutally honest. QUERY VERSION 1: When the FBI closes its investigation into his sister’s death, Special Agent Jonah White sets off on a vigilante quest to track down her killer and stolen inhe...