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by Lil Tailor
December 8th, 2010, 3:33 pm
Forum: Synopses and Plot Outlines
Topic: Synopsis: Harbinger
Replies: 4
Views: 2044

Re: Synopsis: Harbinger

Opening: Micah is an ordinary high schooler, in a happy relationship with his best friend's sister. One day, he is suddenly taken as the vessel of Fenris, an ancient Norse deity imprisoned for the last millennium in a rift in spacetime. Afterward, he is greeted by a man who calls himself Apollo, wh...
by Lil Tailor
December 8th, 2010, 3:08 pm
Forum: Connect With a Critique Partner
Topic: Detailed Synopsis Crit Partner? (YA)
Replies: 4
Views: 1713

Re: Detailed Synopsis Crit Partner? (YA)

If you're still looking I'll take a look at it.
by Lil Tailor
December 8th, 2010, 2:59 pm
Forum: Queries
Topic: THE ELITE (YA) -revised!
Replies: 29
Views: 5375

Re: THE ELITE (YA)

A love triangle is not supposed to have life or death consequences, but 16-year-old Avery Hunter is about to discover that the stakes are higher when you’re the missing heir to the most powerful family in the world a love triangle just may have life or death consequences . Avery Hunter has always b...
by Lil Tailor
December 6th, 2010, 1:51 pm
Forum: Queries
Topic: THE ELITE (YA) -revised!
Replies: 29
Views: 5375

Re: THE ELITE (YA)

I'm going to give this my best shot. 16-year-old Avery Hunter thinks she might finally have found her place in the world when she finds out that she has eccentric, wealthy family her mother never told her about. I feel like the preceding sentance could be much tighter. Consider something like When a...
by Lil Tailor
December 4th, 2010, 1:39 pm
Forum: Queries
Topic: *Revised* QUERY: THE DRAKE WAR
Replies: 40
Views: 8281

Re: QUERY: THE DRAKE WAR

Thanks for all the great comments. I have revised my query. ** Dear Ms. Agent: After faking her death to escape a group of supernatural mercenaries, Lillim Callina has been eking out her life as a paranormal investigator. When a seemingly routine case causes her to inadvertently kidnap an infant, sh...
by Lil Tailor
December 3rd, 2010, 12:00 am
Forum: Queries
Topic: *Revised* QUERY: THE DRAKE WAR
Replies: 40
Views: 8281

*Revised* QUERY: THE DRAKE WAR

*revised query on post 31* Dear Ms. Agent: After faking her death to escape a group of supernatural mercenaries, Lillim Callina has been eking out her life as a paranormal investigator. When a seemingly routine case causes her to inadvertently kidnap the infant son of a werewolf king and turn him ov...
by Lil Tailor
December 2nd, 2010, 11:56 pm
Forum: Queries
Topic: QUERY -- THE FERRYMAN -- Revision No. 1
Replies: 12
Views: 3005

Re: QUERY -- THE FERRYMAN REVISION # 1

SECOND VERSION--- THANKS IN ADVANCE FOR ALL ADVICE. Charlie wants what any man wants: love, adventure and the coins of recently deceased souls . I got it, but it took a while. Beware that the possibilities of a reader not getting it might be higher than those that do. After 100 years as the Underwo...
by Lil Tailor
December 2nd, 2010, 11:30 pm
Forum: Queries
Topic: VIRTUAL JERUSALEM, a novel--Satirical Thriller
Replies: 5
Views: 1153

Re: VIRTUAL JERUSALEM, a novel--Satirical Thriller

Dear Mr. Agent, Set in 2034 in an America drunk on religion and consumerism Virtual Jerusalem is the tongue-in-cheek epic of Ken Clarion, a retiring spy on a seemingly simple final mission that blossoms into a global crisis, forcing Ken to choose between his life and the plans of enemies who see th...