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by EllieAnn
September 15th, 2010, 9:20 am
Forum: Queries
Topic: Final (I Hope) Query Letter - The Oracle's Revenge
Replies: 9
Views: 1720

Re: Final (I Hope) Query Letter - The Oracle's Revenge

What a cool story! I'd be excited to read it.
Just one grammatical error:
but Apollo has a different request . . . destroy the books. (there is a space between every period)
I like how this is a modern story of a Green hero's quest. It sounds fantastic!
by EllieAnn
September 15th, 2010, 9:13 am
Forum: Queries
Topic: New attempt at YA query - The Evolution of Janie
Replies: 5
Views: 922

Re: New attempt at YA query - The Evolution of Janie

Ang- Just as usual with writers-I'm going to have to disagree with bookwatcher's comments. :-) I believe shape shifting is a detailed enough word and you shouldn't explain it any further (that is what synopsis' are for). And I think that "one where her father abandoned her to an abusive mother" is a...
by EllieAnn
September 15th, 2010, 9:05 am
Forum: Queries
Topic: MG historical novel, query revised
Replies: 25
Views: 4138

Re: MG historical novel, query revised

Mark- What a fantastic book! It sounds like you've done your research and really gotten into the head of your characters. The query is very well written! The one sentence that made me stop was this: "New responsibilities and his burning hatred for Charlie Spears transform him from a carefree adolesc...