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by Nicole Zoltack
February 11th, 2010, 7:09 pm
Forum: Queries
Topic: QUERY: The Land of Imagining
Replies: 8
Views: 1666

QUERY: The Land of Imagining

Query letters are so hard to get just right so I was hoping to get some help with mine: Dear [insert agent's name]: I am seeking representation for my 80,000 word fantasy young adult novel, THE LAND OF IMAGINING. Alexia thinks she’s just an ordinary girl with a lofty goal – to become a best-selling ...
by Nicole Zoltack
February 11th, 2010, 7:01 pm
Forum: Queries
Topic: Dragon
Replies: 37
Views: 5517

Re: QUERY: THE LAST DRAGON

I agree with the others, if you work on the paragraph transitions, this query will be much stronger. Also, I'm curious, why does the king want a peasant to marry his son? I'm sure there is a reason why, and you might want to include that in the query. Just my opinion, ignore if you want.