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by SSB
August 24th, 2010, 6:56 pm
Forum: Excerpts
Topic: YA Flash Fiction
Replies: 7
Views: 1440

Re: YA Flash Fiction

I want to let you know that I am not a published author. I am far from an expert. I am giving you my view point as a reader only. I agree the other poster, only one anywhere. I didn't want to sit next to him. Anywhere, anywhere but there. But I didn't have a choice. There were four empty seats at th...
by SSB
August 24th, 2010, 6:18 pm
Forum: Excerpts
Topic: First Page YA: opinions on voice and technique appreciated
Replies: 30
Views: 5829

Re: First Page YA: opinions on voice and technique appreciated

First I want you to know that I am not a published author. (Only a wannabe) I am going to give you my opinion as a reader. You had me until here: “I’ll be fine.” I leaned against my mom as cheesy organ music churned from the funeral parlor speakers and a woman started to sing. She warbled through th...