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by Nathan Bransford
January 4th, 2021, 1:20 pm
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: Page critique 1/14/21
Replies: 1
Views: 53

Page critique 1/14/21

UPDATE: because of all the news and distractions today, I'm pushing this post back to Thursday 1/14/21! Below is the page up for critique on the blog on Thursday. Feel free to chime in with comments, create your own redline (please note the "font colour" button above the posting box, which looks lik...
by Nathan Bransford
December 14th, 2020, 12:16 pm
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: Query critique 12/17/20
Replies: 0
Views: 83

Query critique 12/17/20

Want to see how your editing approach compares to mine? Below is the query up for critique on the blog on Thursday. Feel free to chime in with comments, create your own redline (please note the "font colour" button above the posting box, which looks like a drop of ink), and otherwise offer feedback....
by Nathan Bransford
December 7th, 2020, 11:08 am
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: Page critique 12/10/20
Replies: 0
Views: 97

Page critique 12/10/20

Below is the page up for critique on the blog on Thursday. Feel free to chime in with comments, create your own redline (please note the "font colour" button above the posting box, which looks like a drop of ink), and otherwise offer feedback. When offering your feedback, please please remember to b...
by Nathan Bransford
November 30th, 2020, 12:32 pm
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: Query critique 12/3/20
Replies: 0
Views: 99

Query critique 12/3/20

Want to see how your editing approach compares to mine? Below is the query up for critique on the blog on Thursday. Feel free to chime in with comments, create your own redline (please note the "font colour" button above the posting box, which looks like a drop of ink), and otherwise offer feedback....
by Nathan Bransford
November 16th, 2020, 11:10 am
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: Page critique 11/19/20
Replies: 0
Views: 120

Page critique 11/19/20

Below is the page up for critique on the blog on Thursday. Feel free to chime in with comments, create your own redline (please note the "font colour" button above the posting box, which looks like a drop of ink), and otherwise offer feedback. When offering your feedback, please please remember to b...
by Nathan Bransford
November 16th, 2020, 10:56 am
Forum: Ask Nathan
Topic: Does a Novel Need to Have a Moral?
Replies: 1
Views: 503

Re: Does a Novel Need to Have a Moral?

A novel definitely doesn't need a moral! Focus on telling a good story not teaching a lesson, and that goes for books of all ages.
by Nathan Bransford
November 12th, 2020, 10:01 am
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: Query critique 11/12/20
Replies: 0
Views: 111

Query critique 11/12/20

Want to see how your editing approach compares to mine? Below is the query up for critique on the blog today. Feel free to chime in with comments, create your own redline (please note the "font colour" button above the posting box, which looks like a drop of ink), and otherwise offer feedback. When ...
by Nathan Bransford
November 2nd, 2020, 10:27 am
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: Page critique 11/5/20
Replies: 0
Views: 170

Page critique 11/5/20

Below is the page up for critique on the blog on Thursday. Feel free to chime in with comments, create your own redline (please note the "font colour" button above the posting box, which looks like a drop of ink), and otherwise offer feedback. When offering your feedback, please please remember to b...
by Nathan Bransford
October 26th, 2020, 12:14 pm
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: Query critique 10/29/20
Replies: 0
Views: 114

Query critique 10/29/20

Want to see how your editing approach compares to mine? Below is the query up for critique on the blog on Thursday. Feel free to chime in with comments, create your own redline (please note the "font colour" button above the posting box, which looks like a drop of ink), and otherwise offer feedback....
by Nathan Bransford
October 19th, 2020, 10:52 am
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: Page critique 10/22/20
Replies: 0
Views: 133

Page critique 10/22/20

Below is the page up for critique on the blog on Thursday. Feel free to chime in with comments, create your own redline (please note the "font colour" button above the posting box, which looks like a drop of ink), and otherwise offer feedback. When offering your feedback, please please remember to b...
by Nathan Bransford
October 5th, 2020, 11:43 am
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: Query critique 10/8/20
Replies: 0
Views: 161

Query critique 10/8/20

Want to see how your editing approach compares to mine? Below is the query up for critique on the blog on Thursday. Feel free to chime in with comments, create your own redline (please note the "font colour" button above the posting box, which looks like a drop of ink), and otherwise offer feedback....
by Nathan Bransford
September 28th, 2020, 10:55 am
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: Page critique 10/1/20
Replies: 0
Views: 159

Page critique 10/1/20

Below is the page up for critique on the blog on Thursday. Feel free to chime in with comments, create your own redline (please note the "font colour" button above the posting box, which looks like a drop of ink), and otherwise offer feedback. When offering your feedback, please please remember to b...
by Nathan Bransford
September 21st, 2020, 11:11 am
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: Query critique 9/24/20
Replies: 0
Views: 204

Query critique 9/24/20

Want to see how your editing approach compares to mine? Below is the query up for critique on the blog on Thursday. Feel free to chime in with comments, create your own redline (please note the "font colour" button above the posting box, which looks like a drop of ink), and otherwise offer feedback....
by Nathan Bransford
September 14th, 2020, 11:49 am
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: Page critique 9/17/20
Replies: 0
Views: 162

Page critique 9/17/20

Below is the page up for critique on the blog on Thursday. Feel free to chime in with comments, create your own redline (please note the "font colour" button above the posting box, which looks like a drop of ink), and otherwise offer feedback. When offering your feedback, please please remember to b...
by Nathan Bransford
August 31st, 2020, 11:43 am
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: Query critique 9/3/20
Replies: 0
Views: 208

Query critique 9/3/20

Want to see how your editing approach compares to mine? Below is the query up for critique on the blog on Thursday. Feel free to chime in with comments, create your own redline (please note the "font colour" button above the posting box, which looks like a drop of ink), and otherwise offer feedback....