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by adamg73
July 28th, 2010, 12:51 am
Forum: Town Hall
Topic: The Introduction Thread
Replies: 629
Views: 238948

Re: The Introduction Thread

Hi, my name's Adam and I live in Corvallis, OR with my beautiful wife and my dog. I used to hate writing but now, if I'm not reading or hiking, my off-time is usually spent doing that very thing. I'm currently a graduate student at Oregon State University going for my Masters in Wildlife and I love ...
by adamg73
July 28th, 2010, 12:29 am
Forum: Queries
Topic: PANDEMIC - YA Urban Fantasy
Replies: 15
Views: 2788

Re: PANDEMIC - YA Urban Fantasy

Ok, first and foremost, I LOVE ZOMBIES!!! That having been said, I found your query engaging. I've suggested a few revisions for your review. For sixteen-year-old Parrish Sorrows, life is a nightmare. Two weeks ago, her biggest worry was that she would never crawl out of the shadow of her violin pro...
by adamg73
July 28th, 2010, 12:14 am
Forum: Queries
Topic: The House of Mirrors - Query Update - A BIG Thanks
Replies: 21
Views: 3903

Re: The House of Mirrors - Latest #4 on page 2

I found the second line of the first paragrah a little awkward. May I suggest:

All that’s left is a set of glowing footprints leading Sarah to a creepy mansion that seems to have appeared out of nowhere.

I love the thuggish teddy bear, it gives the query personality.
by adamg73
July 28th, 2010, 12:02 am
Forum: Queries
Topic: Query - The Griffinborn
Replies: 5
Views: 1000

Re: Query - The Griffinborn

The Chaos Lord’s war against the Ancients ended in betrayal, the relics of their dark reign scattered and hidden away to be forgotten by the world of men. Ten thousand years later one such relic , entrusted to the keeping of the Griffin Lords , has been stolen, awakening an ancient dread. To honor ...