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by RebeccaB
July 19th, 2010, 2:15 am
Forum: Queries
Topic: A life in Death - YA Fantasy *New Version, Page 4*
Replies: 41
Views: 6014

Re: A life in Death - YA Fantasy *New Version, Page 4*

Hi Heather, I think this is your best so far. Corvette O’Connor has the perfect life; awesome friends, great family and pretty much anything a teen could want. The only problem: her seventeenth birthday. The day all humans dread. This is a great opening line, it grabs you instantly. Turning into a ...
by RebeccaB
July 17th, 2010, 5:24 am
Forum: Excerpts
Topic: BLOOD WILL TELL, Urban Fantasy, Revised
Replies: 10
Views: 1742

Re: BLOOD WILL TELL, Urban Fantasy

Chapter 1: A Death in the Family Valeriah hurdled the locked gate and raced on down the path. Dirt? Grass? Pebbled? Sand? Cobble stone? What type of path? The cliff-top trail was closed at night for good reason; one misstep could end in a fatal fall to the jagged brown rocks and crashing waves below...
by RebeccaB
July 12th, 2010, 3:59 am
Forum: Procrastination
Topic: Poison: Bourbon or Whisky?
Replies: 21
Views: 5652

Re: Poison: Bourbon or Whisky?

Whiskey without a doubt.

I've always found Bourbon to be too thick and sweet for my tastes.

But after a few whiskeys I can stomach almost anything.
by RebeccaB
July 12th, 2010, 3:54 am
Forum: Procrastination
Topic: Forum game: Random facts about you
Replies: 126
Views: 31286

Re: Forum game: Random facts about you

Another random fact is I have slight OCD. It's just little things; like no matter what I drink, or how expensive, I always leave a little in the end. I can never bring myself to finish that last mouthful :S And I can attest to how annoying it is to clean up after a visit from Heather. Having to tip...
by RebeccaB
July 12th, 2010, 3:49 am
Forum: Procrastination
Topic: Forum game: Random facts about you
Replies: 126
Views: 31286

Re: Forum game: Random facts about you

HillaryJ wrote:Also, I cry during 90-95% of the movies I watch. Also, about 10% of previews.
Ha, Ha, Ha,

This is totally me too.

My Facts: I spend my days looking after mice and rats, I am 27 and still don't have my license, and I have been with my husband since 1997.
by RebeccaB
July 11th, 2010, 3:54 am
Forum: Synopses and Plot Outlines
Topic: SYNOPSIS - Don't come to the House Tonight
Replies: 8
Views: 1805

Re: SYNOPSIS - Don't come to the House Tonight

Hi there, This is a little long for my tastes, but it is a good descriptive base. I hope this helps. Janie, Evie and Candice are three very different girls who meet in primary school and grow up together. OK, so do they grow in the story or are they grown now and have been friends since primary scho...
by RebeccaB
July 11th, 2010, 1:26 am
Forum: Writing
Topic: Planner or Pantser
Replies: 37
Views: 4102

Re: Planner or Pantser

Hi, this is the fly by the seat of my pants writer mentioned in Heathers original post. I see every page of planed plots and character outlines Heather creates, and frankly it gives me a headache even thinking about planning my work. My current WIP was completely spontaneous. My character developed ...