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by Wandaduplooy
December 13th, 2009, 9:06 am
Forum: Queries
Topic: Revised Query... please help...
Replies: 14
Views: 3796

Query - Revised....

One night Connor Riley finds himself wide-awake, unable to explain what woke him—and then the headaches start. Over the next few days, he tries to remember from where he knows the woman who mysteriously disappeared the same night while trying to deal with the headaches escalating in severity. Violen...
by Wandaduplooy
December 11th, 2009, 12:06 am
Forum: Queries
Topic: Revised Query... please help...
Replies: 14
Views: 3796

Re: Query please help...

KappaP I am not complaining I love a honest direct assesment that holds merit and yours does. I also agree with you about editing up — I started with a novel of about 50 000 words and after adding on meat to the original skeleton I am now at just over 80 000 words.
by Wandaduplooy
December 10th, 2009, 2:54 pm
Forum: Queries
Topic: Revised Query... please help...
Replies: 14
Views: 3796

Re: Query please help...

KappaP You are brutal but honest—Thank you... Everything you commented on made sence. I will review and rewrite my query, taking all of your comments into consideration.
by Wandaduplooy
December 10th, 2009, 12:59 pm
Forum: Queries
Topic: The Light of Epertase
Replies: 18
Views: 4976

Re: The Light of Epertase

You are right, Fantacy is difficult to discribe. I am not going to help with the query—my own still needs a lot of work and I don't consider myself expert enouth to comment but I can wish you good luck. Sending your pride and joy out in the world is terrifying; like wathching your child go to school...
by Wandaduplooy
December 10th, 2009, 12:47 pm
Forum: Queries
Topic: Revised Query... please help...
Replies: 14
Views: 3796

Re: Query please help...

Thank you for all the constructive comments. I will consider all and post a revised query for your scrutiny. I have to confess, spelling is my kryptonite… I have a large vocabulary but the spelling… The reason I mention Echtra is because the name of my novel is Echtra : Blood Magick. Describing him ...
by Wandaduplooy
December 10th, 2009, 9:03 am
Forum: Queries
Topic: Revised Query... please help...
Replies: 14
Views: 3796

Revised Query... please help...

I am on the verge to submit my first query letter. I would love your input—I found all of the suggestions given to other authors to be very insightful. I am scared that my letter is too cryptic—should I write a short synopsis. I am unsure how to condense the storylines in my novel to less than one p...
by Wandaduplooy
December 8th, 2009, 7:36 am
Forum: Ask Nathan
Topic: Old Ask Nathan Thread
Replies: 793
Views: 224683

Query

Dear Mr Bransford I am busy with my last editing after my muses read through my novel , standing at just over 80 000 words, and I was planning to query you before the holidays. My question is if I should wait until the new year or would you prefer me to query now—with all the nano rush queries... An...