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by chomsnumnum
March 22nd, 2010, 9:53 pm
Forum: Procrastination
Topic: Best TV show of all time?
Replies: 48
Views: 6887

Re: Best TV show of all time?

I loved BSG, I'll have to rewatch all of those. I have a real thing for Star Trek Voyager. Right now I'm watching "Big Bang Theory" which is hillarious. So the best TV shows of all time. I'm kindof with Sawyer in loving "Little House on the Prairie" (Also loved him reading Watership Down, a personal...
by chomsnumnum
March 16th, 2010, 9:25 pm
Forum: Excerpts
Topic: rewrite now added-Key in the Shadow- wrk title-
Replies: 9
Views: 1868

Re: Key in the Shadow - wrk title- feedback please.

I think you have an OK start here for a first draft. I'm interested to find out more about what happened to put her in the hospital, so that's a good start. The second sentence changed tense so that was confusing right off the bat. And then the tense changes back and forth. Ellie's comments about cr...