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- February 21st, 2010, 12:17 am
- Forum: Queries
- Topic: Meeting of the Waters - query request
- Replies: 21
- Views: 8287
Re: Meeting of the Waters - query request
I think it sounds interesting. I'm not a gamer by any means, but I like the romance aspect. Is Ale's magic actually real, or does she just think it is, or is it real only the game? I think if it's real, it could be fantasy. I'm not sure of contempary fantasy. I like the idea, but I'm not sure about ...
- February 20th, 2010, 10:19 pm
- Forum: Queries
- Topic: Query (Writer's Block YA Fantasy)
- Replies: 10
- Views: 3943
Re: Query (Writer's Block)
Thank you for your thought Geegee! I think I am just panicking because I plan to submit soon!
- February 20th, 2010, 10:03 pm
- Forum: Queries
- Topic: Query "Blood of Ihdun' YA Urban Fantasy
- Replies: 24
- Views: 8977
Re: Query "Blood of Ihdun'
So I see! Provo's better. ;)
- February 20th, 2010, 10:00 pm
- Forum: Excerpts
- Topic: Writer's Block (Story Excerpt)
- Replies: 13
- Views: 6065
Re: Writer's Block (Story Excerpt)
Sorry I probaby wasn't clear. I meant I didn't want to drop Anne's age becuase I didn't want a 16 year old girl dating a man who is old enough to have his own apartment. Currently Anne is 18 and a high school graduate living with roommates. Nicholas is 20. They're all college students. :) (Well, Nic...
- February 20th, 2010, 7:53 pm
- Forum: Excerpts
- Topic: Writer's Block (Story Excerpt)
- Replies: 13
- Views: 6065
Re: Writer's Block (Story Excerpt)
Thank you very much for your insight Vic! I can definitely work on that part. It felt wrong to me too, and I am glad that you pointed it out! Amazing how that works isn't it? I plan to market this as Young Adult...rather, I like to think of it as Young Adult fantasy, but I am not entirely sure. The ...
- February 20th, 2010, 7:38 pm
- Forum: Writing
- Topic: The Seven Deadly Sins of Writing
- Replies: 9
- Views: 3933
Re: The Seven Deadly Sins of Writing
Those are good! And great inspiration for my book! ;)
- February 20th, 2010, 7:37 pm
- Forum: Finding An Agent
- Topic: Rejection Stats
- Replies: 227
- Views: 153278
Re: Rejection Stats
I haven't sent anything out yet. I was told my first book wasn't good enough, so I didn't even try. This time I am determined even if I hear that again. I need my stack of rejection slips!
- February 20th, 2010, 7:33 pm
- Forum: Writing
- Topic: Daily Darling
- Replies: 21
- Views: 7705
Re: Daily Darling
But self indulgent messes are so much fun... ;)
- February 20th, 2010, 7:15 pm
- Forum: Queries
- Topic: Query (Writer's Block YA Fantasy)
- Replies: 10
- Views: 3943
Re: Query (Writer's Block)
Thank you for the suggestion GeeGee! You're very good at reworking! I have a question, and I think I may be over thinking things, but... The story takes place in a small town in Utah. I've been debating if I should change it to a place in Idaho or Colorado because it doesn't have anything to do with...
- February 20th, 2010, 5:50 pm
- Forum: Writing
- Topic: Daily Darling
- Replies: 21
- Views: 7705
Re: Daily Darling
I had to delete four thousand words today becasue I forgot the rules of my own world. ha! Darling hard to part with: “We’re clear.” The man whistled sharply. “Can I trust you not to scream this time?” Anne nodded, and he removed his arm. “You shouldn’t tell someone not to scream, then tell them you ...
- February 20th, 2010, 4:00 pm
- Forum: Writing
- Topic: Scents, smells and aromas
- Replies: 6
- Views: 2267
Re: Scents, smells and aromas
Don't overdo it. Include smells, yes, and include colors, but there are some problems with being too exact and lavish in your descriptions of anything. One, you descend into purple prose. Two, you get in your reader's way. When you say your character walks into the kitchen and smells garlic, your r...
- February 20th, 2010, 3:58 pm
- Forum: Writing
- Topic: Qualified to Write???
- Replies: 25
- Views: 9353
Re: Qualified to Write???
Can I ask... at what point did you feel comfortable that your grammar, punctuation, ability to avoid the seven deadly sins of writing, style, etc, were now at MS submitting level? I find it hard to make the judgement call for myself. I have had people reading my work since I was 15 and telling me h...
- February 20th, 2010, 3:50 pm
- Forum: Writing
- Topic: Qualified to Write???
- Replies: 25
- Views: 9353
Re: Qualified to Write???
My qualifications to write are summed up in three words: I am awesome.
Seriously though, I think unless you are writing non fiction, you don't need qualifications. I've been writing novels since I was 15. The first stories were terrible. I've improved since then. ;)
Seriously though, I think unless you are writing non fiction, you don't need qualifications. I've been writing novels since I was 15. The first stories were terrible. I've improved since then. ;)
- February 20th, 2010, 2:04 pm
- Forum: Queries
- Topic: QUERY: SPIRIT HILL - Revision #3
- Replies: 37
- Views: 13636
Re: QUERY: SPIRIT HILL - Literary
It sounds like a pretty solid query to me too. I like the idea as well. I thought it sounded like a ghost story too!
Good luck with this!
Good luck with this!
- February 20th, 2010, 12:50 pm
- Forum: Queries
- Topic: Query: Thicker Than Water
- Replies: 9
- Views: 3092
Re: Query: Thicker Than Water
I think that you need to focus on the main character. Who is driving the story? Is it Don, David, or William? It sounds to me like it is probably mainstream or literary fiction. I don't think it is necessary to mention that this is your first novel.
Good luck with this!
Good luck with this!