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- February 12th, 2010, 5:05 pm
- Forum: Queries
- Topic: Query Letter: You Dear, Sweet Man
- Replies: 4
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Query Letter: You Dear, Sweet Man
In the neon world of advertising, everything is for grabs: ideas, people, even the future. But, what if the line that separates an advertisement from the real world were suddenly erased? What if the person of your fantasies stepped from an ad and beckoned you to follow her back, inviting you to melt...
- February 12th, 2010, 5:01 pm
- Forum: Queries
- Topic: Thriller Query (Genre, that is). Open to Suggestions!
- Replies: 18
- Views: 7891
Re: Thriller Query (Genre, that is). Open to Suggestions!
With my query education, I was taught to tell the whole story for the agent. Use a hook to grab their interest and tell them the story, even the ending. I have received comments from a few agents that stated, "Don't tease me." I could be wrong, of course, because every agent has a differen...
- February 12th, 2010, 4:51 pm
- Forum: Queries
- Topic: QUERY: The Land of Imagining
- Replies: 8
- Views: 3973
Re: QUERY: The Land of Imagining
Hi Nicole:
To tell the truth, your first query letter was difficult to read and follow. The revision was a bit better, but still there seems to be too much shoved in the query. Just the way I read it. Hope this helps.
To tell the truth, your first query letter was difficult to read and follow. The revision was a bit better, but still there seems to be too much shoved in the query. Just the way I read it. Hope this helps.