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by jessiecoon
February 16th, 2010, 1:25 am
Forum: Queries
Topic: Urban Fantasy PULSE
Replies: 5
Views: 1227

Re: Urban Fantasy PULSE

Thanks, taylormillgirl. Hubby agreed that it was a bit vague (You are conspiring for me! yeah!) I have reworked. I get what you're saying about the whole YA thing, but the book is not YA. It has adult characters, so if NEW ADULT ever takes off, that's the category. I've had some people like that se...
by jessiecoon
February 16th, 2010, 12:06 am
Forum: Queries
Topic: Dragon
Replies: 37
Views: 5574

Re: QUERY: THE LAST DRAGON (YA-Fantasy)

I think this version is really good. Good job of taking perfect strangers' advice and applying what works for you. I think you have a great idea and have good solid writing skills. I have been reading a of queries on this site and I have to say that yours now stands out. Plus, I have seen others not...
by jessiecoon
February 12th, 2010, 5:00 pm
Forum: Queries
Topic: Dragon
Replies: 37
Views: 5574

Re: QUERY: THE LAST DRAGON

Overall, I thought it was intriguing but here are the specifics: When the all-powerful King Joseph of Embero informs Nadine, a headstrong seventeen-year-old girl, that she must marry the prince she loathes to satisfy the queen’s dying wish, she decides to flee. It is funny that you describe Nadine a...