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by theWallflower
February 16th, 2010, 10:06 am
Forum: Queries
Topic: Dragon
Replies: 37
Views: 13018

Re: QUERY: THE LAST DRAGON (YA-Fantasy)

Most girls dream of becoming a princess, but Nadine is not most girls. When King Joseph informs her she has been chosen to marry the ruthless prince of Embero, she does the only thing any self-respecting girl would do: She runs. -Why is Nadine not most girls? Give some characteristics. -Is King Jos...
by theWallflower
February 15th, 2010, 11:36 am
Forum: Queries
Topic: Query: Black Hole Son
Replies: 9
Views: 3569

Re: Query: Black Hole Son

Here is a revision. Remy wakes up on a park bench. He has no memory and no idea who he is or how he got there, but he has some pills, some money, a pink sweater, and a strange gun. And the psychic ability to read the history of objects. Ash wakes up in an alley. He has no memory and no idea who he i...
by theWallflower
February 12th, 2010, 11:57 am
Forum: Queries
Topic: Query: Black Hole Son
Replies: 9
Views: 3569

Query: Black Hole Son

Here's my query, please critique. Dear {AGENT}, I am querying because of {REASON}. I think Black Hole Son would be a good match for your interests. Remy wakes up on a park bench. He has no memory and no idea who he is or how he got there. But he has some pills, some money, a pink sweater, and a stra...
by theWallflower
February 12th, 2010, 11:56 am
Forum: Queries
Topic: Query: Too Enchanted *getting closer*
Replies: 19
Views: 8328

Re: Query: Too Enchanted

Brand is an enchanted toad living in the forest kingdom of Garn. But when Brand is turned into a human he must leave the quiet safety of his forest home and go to the human lands to capture the Enchantress that cursed him. All while dodging women who are drawn to him by his curse and evading the de...
by theWallflower
February 12th, 2010, 11:44 am
Forum: Queries
Topic: Ready to be done with this! Query for VISIONS (YA)
Replies: 22
Views: 9830

Re: VISIONS (YA)

Channing Russo, a grieving seventeen-year-old must use her unwanted ability to see into the future, track down, and stop the serial killer who is terrorizing her hometown of Princeton, NJ. What is she grieving about? What is it about her ability that makes it unwanted? I think it would be pretty ne...
by theWallflower
February 12th, 2010, 11:22 am
Forum: Queries
Topic: Query: Through Fire and Ice (NEW VERSION!)
Replies: 14
Views: 6858

Re: Query: Through Fire and Ice

Sucks . That’s the word lieutenant Jana Darren would use to describe her life. Fifteen years in the military has caused her to slip into a coma of routine, and she hates it. A long awaited transfer only brings more problems. Special ops soldier Aeronth is driving her crazy—in more ways than one. Sh...