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- July 19th, 2018, 1:02 pm
- Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
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Short Story/Fiction 255 words (sorry, if I cut the last 5 it wouldn't make sense). Working title: The Caravan Corey didn’t want to leave, but, since his mother had already agreed, he was sure the General would leave him behind if he didn’t get in the ugly rusted out Hummer, so he did what he was tol...