It sounds like "sexy fish" at the end of David Guetta's "Sexy B1tch"
at least that's what I tell my kids ;)
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- November 29th, 2010, 1:54 pm
- Forum: Procrastination
- Topic: Favorite misheard song lyrics
- Replies: 33
- Views: 37180
- May 30th, 2010, 12:33 am
- Forum: Queries
- Topic: Query "Blood of Ihdun' YA Urban Fantasy
- Replies: 24
- Views: 8703
Re: Query "Blood of Ihdun' YA Urban Fantasy
k lachrymal, reworked it. try this. Dear Agent, Seventeen-year-old Kat is haunted by dreams of people she's never met. Well, maybe "people" isn't the right word: a small boy with wings, psychotic goblins and a good looking elven prince who also happens to be an absolute jerk. Kat is certai...
- May 29th, 2010, 3:56 am
- Forum: Excerpts
- Topic: Prologue Blood of Idhun
- Replies: 9
- Views: 3719
Re: Prologue Blood of Idhun
Revision The cloaked figure moved through the twilight paths of Liberty Park, just another shadow, blending among the gloom of early evening. With little effort, he slipped unnoticed by the addicts and dealers skulking along the walks. Barong felt at ease here, no one ever noticed him, too absorbed ...
- May 29th, 2010, 3:51 am
- Forum: Queries
- Topic: Query "Blood of Ihdun' YA Urban Fantasy
- Replies: 24
- Views: 8703
Re: Query "Blood of Ihdun' YA Urban Fantasy
tightened my query up as well as dropping just about 3k words from the novel!lol
- April 26th, 2010, 4:07 pm
- Forum: Queries
- Topic: Query "Blood of Ihdun' YA Urban Fantasy
- Replies: 24
- Views: 8703
Re: Query "Blood of Ihdun' YA Urban Fantasy
How does this query sound instead? Dear Agent, Seventeen year old Kat is haunted by dreams of people she's never met. Well maybe "people" isn't the right word, a small boy with wings, psychotic goblins and a drop dead, gorgeous elven prince! BLOOD OF IHDUN is a Young Adult/Urban Fantasy. I...
- April 15th, 2010, 1:31 am
- Forum: Excerpts
- Topic: Prologue Blood of Idhun
- Replies: 9
- Views: 3719
Re: Prologue Blood of Idhun
Thanks for the feedback Lee. I'll go back through, keeping your suggestions in mind. Will re-post in a few days. BTW my husband is gonna love your post!
;D
;D
- April 14th, 2010, 1:46 am
- Forum: Procrastination
- Topic: How old are you?
- Replies: 112
- Views: 46746
Re: How old are you?
lol just found this thread! What a perfect way to end the night! :D I'm 37,just started truly writing last feb although I just found a modern day Romeo and Juliet script that I wrote in High School.I got an A so I thought why not read it.It was truly horrible! lmbo! I'm so glad my current novel is n...
- April 13th, 2010, 11:53 pm
- Forum: Queries
- Topic: Guidelines for Posting Queries
- Replies: 39
- Views: 102813
Re: Guidelines for Posting Queries or Excerpts From Your Work
sorry Quil!I never thought that it might be annoying for the original query to disappear. :(
I was just trying to save space. Henceforth I will post revised query below in the thread.
I was just trying to save space. Henceforth I will post revised query below in the thread.
- April 12th, 2010, 9:52 am
- Forum: Queries
- Topic: Query: VALENTINE, New Revision & stuff
- Replies: 33
- Views: 11900
Re: Query: VALENTINE
P.S.please feel free to shred my own query! :)
- April 12th, 2010, 9:51 am
- Forum: Queries
- Topic: Query: VALENTINE, New Revision & stuff
- Replies: 33
- Views: 11900
Re: Query: VALENTINE
rainbow, if the sister is a major player in the book, maybe up the stakes as to her part. eg. Nineteen year-old Adam owes his sister. Big time. The five year-old saved his life when she found him lying in a pool of blood after he tried to commit suicide. He swore he'd make it up to her! Something li...
- April 12th, 2010, 9:35 am
- Forum: Excerpts
- Topic: New Manuscript - What do you think of this style?
- Replies: 14
- Views: 5596
Re: New Manuscript - What do you think of this style?
Blanche, not all 14 and 15 year olds are such. my 14 year old son is actually quite innocent. I suppose we have tried to keep him rather protected from some of the harsher realities of the world.(he believed that you couldn't have children unless you were married until my daycare girl informed him o...
- April 11th, 2010, 3:25 am
- Forum: Writing
- Topic: Music or quiet when you write?
- Replies: 64
- Views: 30946
Re: Music or quiet when you write?
I have six children who can be very distracting. :) I put the ear-buds in and crank it up until I can't hear any "outside" noise. Although it can't be music that I like to sing along to or I get distracted as well. It has to be fast and up beat as well or I just drift off. I couldn't do li...
- April 10th, 2010, 8:58 pm
- Forum: Excerpts
- Topic: New Manuscript - What do you think of this style?
- Replies: 14
- Views: 5596
Re: New Manuscript - What do you think of this style?
Hi Blanche, I'm not a pro or anything, my novel hasn't published yet, but I have read a lot. :) The premise sounds good but I found the story rather confusing. You need more details, it seemed rather rushed and there are a few grammar mistakes. (nothing stops the flow of a story for me like grammar ...
- April 10th, 2010, 8:45 pm
- Forum: Excerpts
- Topic: Prologue Blood of Idhun
- Replies: 9
- Views: 3719
Re: Prologue Blood of Idhun
hopefully final edit of my prologue. let me know how it feels.
- April 10th, 2010, 8:40 pm
- Forum: Queries
- Topic: MG Novel Query
- Replies: 14
- Views: 4941
Re: MG Novel Query
The revised query sounds good to me, I have a nine year old and I think she'll like it. :)
maybe instead of tea you could put in time to do her homework or some such thing.
keep up the good work!
maybe instead of tea you could put in time to do her homework or some such thing.
keep up the good work!