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OK will do. ANd believe me thank you for your help it really does help

3rd person POV

Here is chapter 2 Chapter 2 Eight O’clock pm. Officer Patrick White and his training officer John Smith somehow managed to be first on the scene. When they got there, Security had already taped off the area. White went to the head security guard to ask questions. “Who was the first to find the bodie...

I am having trouble making it long enough to send to an agent if I need to

Ok Thanks J.T.

Hello everyone,
I would like to know how do I go about writing a scene with my killer and the main detective only being 200 feet away from each other and not know it without using a scene break.

Hello everyone I am having a bit of trouble writing a synopsis for my mystery novel I am working. I have posted it below. Thanks in Advance Brian. Walking in a Killer’s wonderland is a story about a detective named Will Atoms which takes place during the Christmas Holidays. Atoms starts off as the h...

Hey everyone,
I want to know, should I post a new thread for each chapter or just keep it under one thread?

Should I post a new thread for each chapter

J.T. I went through and made the changes that you suggested and the reason she removed the heart from the cooler was because she put it in a gift box to leave behind for the detectives to see.

Thank you very much J.T. Shea I will make the necessary changes> Your feedback is very much aprrecaited

Hi Russd
I read your post and I am genuinely interested in being a possible critique partner. Let me know if you are interested as well.

Hello All, I need some critiquing done on my unfinished manuscript. Please let me know where I need to polish some. Here is Chapter 1 to start. Any and all feedback is welcome. I seriously need the help. Thanks. Brian. Chapter 1 Six o’clock on the dot. Rebecca Austin was always the last to leave the...

Hi I'm Brian and I am working on my first mystery novel. This is my first time on the forum so any tips and suggestions would be great. I live in Bradenton, Florida and currently have two novels indie published but am looking to make a splash in the traditional publishing pool.