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by mysterywriter82
May 12th, 2018, 5:14 pm
Forum: Writing
Topic: Writing a scene with both the protagonist and antagonist in the same area.
Replies: 4
Views: 3677

Re: Writing a scene with both the protagonist and antagonist in the same area.

OK will do. ANd believe me thank you for your help it really does help
by mysterywriter82
May 12th, 2018, 12:02 pm
Forum: Excerpts
Topic: Need Cirtique on some of my manuscript
Replies: 6
Views: 1497

Re: Need Cirtique on some of my manuscript

Here is chapter 2 Chapter 2 Eight O’clock pm. Officer Patrick White and his training officer John Smith somehow managed to be first on the scene. When they got there, Security had already taped off the area. White went to the head security guard to ask questions. “Who was the first to find the bodie...
by mysterywriter82
May 12th, 2018, 11:58 am
Forum: Synopses and Plot Outlines
Topic: Synopsis for "Walking in a Killer's wonderland"
Replies: 2
Views: 2058

Re: Synopsis for "Walking in a Killer's wonderland"

I am having trouble making it long enough to send to an agent if I need to
by mysterywriter82
May 11th, 2018, 9:32 pm
Forum: Writing
Topic: Writing a scene with both the protagonist and antagonist in the same area.
Replies: 4
Views: 3677

Writing a scene with both the protagonist and antagonist in the same area.

Hello everyone,
I would like to know how do I go about writing a scene with my killer and the main detective only being 200 feet away from each other and not know it without using a scene break.
by mysterywriter82
May 11th, 2018, 4:23 pm
Forum: Synopses and Plot Outlines
Topic: Synopsis for "Walking in a Killer's wonderland"
Replies: 2
Views: 2058

Synopsis for "Walking in a Killer's wonderland"

Hello everyone I am having a bit of trouble writing a synopsis for my mystery novel I am working. I have posted it below. Thanks in Advance Brian. Walking in a Killer’s wonderland is a story about a detective named Will Atoms which takes place during the Christmas Holidays. Atoms starts off as the h...
by mysterywriter82
May 11th, 2018, 4:09 pm
Forum: Excerpts
Topic: Should I post a new thread for each chapter?
Replies: 2
Views: 1998

Should I post a new thread for each chapter?

Hey everyone,
I want to know, should I post a new thread for each chapter or just keep it under one thread?
by mysterywriter82
May 11th, 2018, 4:07 pm
Forum: Excerpts
Topic: Need Cirtique on some of my manuscript
Replies: 6
Views: 1497

Re: Need Cirtique on some of my manuscript

Should I post a new thread for each chapter
by mysterywriter82
May 11th, 2018, 12:17 pm
Forum: Excerpts
Topic: Need Cirtique on some of my manuscript
Replies: 6
Views: 1497

Re: Need Cirtique on some of my manuscript

J.T. I went through and made the changes that you suggested and the reason she removed the heart from the cooler was because she put it in a gift box to leave behind for the detectives to see.
by mysterywriter82
May 11th, 2018, 12:01 pm
Forum: Excerpts
Topic: Need Cirtique on some of my manuscript
Replies: 6
Views: 1497

Re: Need Cirtique on some of my manuscript

Thank you very much J.T. Shea I will make the necessary changes> Your feedback is very much aprrecaited
by mysterywriter82
May 9th, 2018, 7:49 pm
Forum: Connect With a Critique Partner
Topic: Critique Partner Wanted - Mystery or Thriller
Replies: 1
Views: 1154

Re: Critique Partner Wanted - Mystery or Thriller

Hi Russd
I read your post and I am genuinely interested in being a possible critique partner. Let me know if you are interested as well.
by mysterywriter82
May 9th, 2018, 7:25 pm
Forum: Excerpts
Topic: Need Cirtique on some of my manuscript
Replies: 6
Views: 1497

Need Cirtique on some of my manuscript

Hello All, I need some critiquing done on my unfinished manuscript. Please let me know where I need to polish some. Here is Chapter 1 to start. Any and all feedback is welcome. I seriously need the help. Thanks. Brian. Chapter 1 Six o’clock on the dot. Rebecca Austin was always the last to leave the...
by mysterywriter82
May 8th, 2018, 10:43 pm
Forum: Town Hall
Topic: The Introduction Thread
Replies: 618
Views: 195781

Re: The Introduction Thread

Hi I'm Brian and I am working on my first mystery novel. This is my first time on the forum so any tips and suggestions would be great. I live in Bradenton, Florida and currently have two novels indie published but am looking to make a splash in the traditional publishing pool.