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by SEWhiteBooks
June 15th, 2017, 12:22 pm
Forum: Queries
Topic: The Alien Diaries - query
Replies: 4
Views: 1808

Re: The Alien Diaries - query

Hi Glenn, The first part is great. Very enticing, it made me want to keep reading. Diaries from 1781 written by a teenage girl? Interesting. An alien visitation?? What? Second paragraph a run-on sentence stopped me. " . . . dealing with simmering tensions with the beautiful, but aloof caretaker, Mad...
by SEWhiteBooks
June 15th, 2017, 11:53 am
Forum: Finding An Agent
Topic: Ten (Totally Made Up) Commandments of Querying
Replies: 2
Views: 1128

Ten (Totally Made Up) Commandments of Querying

We all know the process of querying can be hard on the author and their ego, but we may not know how hard it can be on the agents wading through hundreds of query letters in a day. Just for fun and because humor helps, a silly set of thoughts on the perils of querying. I'm indebted to Ulysses on the...