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by nhlowrey
May 8th, 2017, 8:17 pm
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: NEW - Nominate Your Query for a Critique on the Blog
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Re: NEW - Nominate Your Query for a Critique on the Blog

Thanks Nathan, I am enjoying reading your blog and getting lots of good tips. My draft query is below. Dear [AGENT NAME] On his deathbed, Laina’s father confesses a secret he has kept hidden all her life – the fabled city of Atlantis is real. Orphaned in a foreign country, Laina must decide if she a...