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by HeatherM
May 7th, 2017, 10:07 pm
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: Query Critique Tuesday 5/9
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Re: Query Critique Tuesday 5/9

In my most humble opinion, I believe the first paragraph should be deleted. I would begin with "A Unified Theory of Love, weds two interlocking narratives to produce an ardent quest for home and connection amidst the fallout of war." I do not believe an agent would care about why you wrote your manu...