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by Feltenk
May 13th, 2017, 9:52 pm
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: NEW - Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Replies: 22
Views: 6022

Re: NEW - Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog

Title: Counting the Stars Genre: YA Contemporary with Speculative Elements First 250 words: The funeral home restroom smells like shit-covered roses. As much as I’d like to leave, I have to finish drawing a flock of birds on thin pieces of toilet paper. Then I’ll feel less shaky, more in control. At...
by Feltenk
April 29th, 2017, 12:10 pm
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: NEW - Nominate Your Query for a Critique on the Blog
Replies: 16
Views: 4699

Re: NEW - Nominate Your Query for a Critique on the Blog

Dear (Agent's name) Counting the Stars, a YA contemporary novel with speculative elements, is complete at 83,904 words. 16-year-old Lucy Andrews knows she's different. No one else fears the color red, secretly draws in bathroom stalls, or blames themselves for the world's problems. Fortunately the p...