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by JBC
April 25th, 2017, 2:59 pm
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: NEW - Nominate Your Query for a Critique on the Blog
Replies: 16
Views: 4169

Re: NEW - Nominate Your Query for a Critique on the Blog

Dear Ms. Bloom, Stories that re-imagine or plug gaps in the historical record, and reveal the toggling between split selves (so enjoyably and poignantly done in The Royal We) have always appealed to me. When I found out about the group of Appalachian farm girls, who, unbeknownst to them, were essent...
by JBC
April 25th, 2017, 2:49 pm
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: NEW - Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Replies: 22
Views: 5513

Re: NEW - Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog

First 238 words of my novel, A Unified Theory of Love (literary fiction) Prologue Oak Ridge, Tennessee, 1943 The first day Elizabeth entered Building 9731, she felt a strange pull. Ricocheting inside her skull, caroming around her stripped-bark heart: Oh you again, aren’t we lovely? She had been tol...