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by knowledgeable
May 19th, 2017, 5:55 pm
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: NEW - Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog
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Re: NEW - Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog

Title: The Musician Genre: Literary Fiction Aaron opened his eyes, but he could only see dark. Small spots of cold—snow—pelted his face. Pain shot though his ribs. He tried to suck in air, but his chest—something pushed on his chest. Huge. Heavy. Immovable. Am I dying? How long could I go without br...