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by artrosch
October 5th, 2010, 12:38 am
Forum: Procrastination
Topic: The Sonic Vandals
Replies: 0
Views: 475

The Sonic Vandals

The Sonic Vandals It’s one thirty in the morning. The sound starts in the distance. Boom! Boom! Ka boomboom! Kaboomboom! It slowly grows louder. BOOM BOOM KABOOM! It crescendos and throws me from sleep like an earthquake. BOOM BOOOM BOOOOOM! Then it fades away at the same speed at which it arrived ...
by artrosch
October 1st, 2010, 10:27 pm
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Replies: 720
Views: 285059

Re: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog

Title: Confessions Of An Honest Man Genre: Literary Novel 244 Words July, 1967. Detroit, Michigan Three musicians were standing beside the club’s back door, under a canvas awning with scalloped trim. They wore black tuxedoes, replete with cummerbunds, bow ties and shoes polished to mirror perfection...
by artrosch
August 3rd, 2010, 1:17 am
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Replies: 720
Views: 285059

Re: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog

Title:The Gods Of The Gift genre: Fantasy When he was nine years old, Garuvel Nep Zing discovered that he could disappear. He was sitting in a white gazebo on the family estate. It was hidden by tall slender evergreens to the rear of the Great House, at the end of a sloping lawn. The spot was remote...
by artrosch
July 19th, 2010, 9:50 pm
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Replies: 720
Views: 285059

Re: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog

Title: Confessions Of An Honest Man Word Count: 250 July, 1967. Detroit, Michigan Three musicians were standing beside the club’s back door, under a canvas awning with scalloped trim. They wore black tuxedoes, replete with cummerbunds, bow ties and shoes polished to mirror perfection. The tallest of...