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by aspiring_x
February 25th, 2010, 10:10 am
Forum: Writing
Topic: Daily Darling
Replies: 21
Views: 7779

Re: Daily Darling

"He bummed a cigarette and, squinting around the totem of smoke, pieced together the story for the cops." *sigh* I loved that damned totem, too. sometimes it helps me with the loss anxiety to paste it in a file I have of sentences to be used when appropriate. that way, it's not gone forev...
by aspiring_x
February 24th, 2010, 10:13 pm
Forum: Town Hall
Topic: The Introduction Thread
Replies: 647
Views: 423190

Re: The Introduction Thread

I think it's the understanding of how much time has passed, how quickly it has passed, and how little is left. Life is way too short. There is way too much to do. Thirty comes in two years for me, and I'm staggered by the idea. But when I was younger, and time didn't pass quite so quickly, I remembe...
by aspiring_x
February 24th, 2010, 10:06 pm
Forum: Queries
Topic: QUERY: The Exciting Life and Death of The Amazing Henry
Replies: 4
Views: 2300

Re: QUERY: The Exciting Life and Death of The Amazing Henry

I'm going to give this a whack... but consider the fact that I haven't researched one iota on how to query for a short story collection. So what i tried to do was make it presented more like a novel. Because it seems as though your short stories are so interrelated, that querying it in almost the s...
by aspiring_x
February 24th, 2010, 9:33 pm
Forum: Books
Topic: Craptastic covers... what are your pet peeves?
Replies: 33
Views: 20527

Re: Craptastic covers... what are your pet peeves?

got to second the all-wise demented fairy. i hate cover art that doesn't reflect what's inbetween the pages. also, not big on obviously staged photography. and the general romance fabio style covers. give us something symbolic of the story, or a scene from the book, or something unique to the book. ...
by aspiring_x
February 24th, 2010, 1:06 pm
Forum: Procrastination
Topic: What Brings You to the Keyboard?
Replies: 12
Views: 5193

Re: What Brings You to the Keyboard?

ummm... it's fun and challenging? is that not a good enough answer?
by aspiring_x
February 20th, 2010, 10:50 pm
Forum: Queries
Topic: Query (Writer's Block YA Fantasy)
Replies: 10
Views: 3984

Re: Query (Writer's Block)

Ok, I'll give this a shot. My main problem with this query, is that I thought it told a bit too much. It was almost more like a shrunken synopsis. let's try to find the hook, conflict, and quest here... by the way, have you read the inkheart trilogy? i got inkdeath for christmas, but haven't gotten ...
by aspiring_x
February 20th, 2010, 10:18 pm
Forum: Excerpts
Topic: Writer's Block (Story Excerpt)
Replies: 13
Views: 6172

Re: Writer's Block (Story Excerpt)

here's a link... http://www.examiner.com/x-11029-Young-Adult-Literature-Examiner~y2009m12d27-St-Martins-Press-New-Adult-Genre i don't know if the name of the genre will catch on, but it seems like there's a bunch of books that fall in the same in between ages place as yours seems to. i originally re...
by aspiring_x
February 20th, 2010, 9:56 pm
Forum: Excerpts
Topic: Writer's Block (Story Excerpt)
Replies: 13
Views: 6172

Re: Writer's Block (Story Excerpt)

well, all i can say about the issue of 18 year old girl +older man is that when i was just barely 18 i dated three men: a 26 year old, a 23 year old, and a 20 year old (now my husband). so, i don't really see too much trouble with it. but i think a distinguishing factor is whether it is a high schoo...
by aspiring_x
February 20th, 2010, 7:38 pm
Forum: Writing
Topic: Daily Darling
Replies: 21
Views: 7779

Re: Daily Darling

Lunetta22 wrote:But self indulgent messes are so much fun... ;)
they sure are... but they shouldn't really be published... unless you're a rock star or have been on reality tv. :)
by aspiring_x
February 20th, 2010, 7:28 pm
Forum: Writing
Topic: Daily Darling
Replies: 21
Views: 7779

Re: Daily Darling

"I don't kill my darlings. I kill the bad parts, not the good. the thing about the darlings is that they are bad, because they hurt the story in some way. however, the author loves these particular bits for reasons not always completely pertaining to the book I think "kill your darlings&qu...
by aspiring_x
February 19th, 2010, 1:59 pm
Forum: Finding An Agent
Topic: Rejection Stats
Replies: 227
Views: 154951

Re: Rejection Stats

Genre: YA Paranormal Total queries sent to date: 3 Queries still awaiting a response: 1 (don't expect to ever get that one back:) Rejections to date: 2 (but really 3) Form rejections: 2 (but one was tricksy, thought it was personal until i checked it out on query tracker :) Personalized rejections: ...
by aspiring_x
February 19th, 2010, 11:27 am
Forum: Books
Topic: Do you like Hardcovers?
Replies: 18
Views: 8086

Re: Do you like Hardcovers?

If it's a book I adore, i love to have a hardback. Like my LOTR trilogy boxed set with amazing illustrations by Alan Lee, or my 1883 copy of The Scarlet Letter. I love old books, with the paper in between the illustrations and the text to preserve them. There's something about holding something that...
by aspiring_x
February 19th, 2010, 10:42 am
Forum: Writing
Topic: Daily Darling
Replies: 21
Views: 7779

Re: Daily Darling

jaime, you sound like a very wise lady :)
by aspiring_x
February 19th, 2010, 12:34 am
Forum: Queries
Topic: TO STAND BEFORE A BROKEN MIRROR oh so very rough of a draft
Replies: 28
Views: 10230

Re: TO STAND BEFORE A BROKEN MIRROR oh so very rough of a draft

Ok, I'm WAY out of my range of usefullness here, but these are my thoughts. It was one of those afternoons, one of those days where the weather outside--what other kind of weather is there, after all?--is suitable for nothing but indoor work, but the air inside is so stuffy that you long to be outdo...
by aspiring_x
February 18th, 2010, 10:02 pm
Forum: Books
Topic: TWILIGHT - thoughts?
Replies: 107
Views: 49356

Re: TWILIGHT - thoughts?

Oh man, I'm going to be in trouble here, because I actually liked the series... One of the main reasons I like the series is that my fifteen year old brother has severe dyslexia. He has learned to hate reading, and has been taunted and bullied for years. The summer before last when I got to see him ...