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- September 13th, 2015, 2:36 pm
- Forum: Queries
- Topic: Query - ONE OF YOU WILL BETRAY ME
- Replies: 2
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I'm not really feeling my query. I think it needs more voice and personality like in the MS. But the thing is, my MS is written in first-person point of view. This is a different genre than most on this forum. But hopefully you guys are willing to take a stab at it and see what it needs and what it ...