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by it's_a_mystery
September 15th, 2015, 9:08 am
Forum: Queries
Topic: Query - ONE OF YOU WILL BETRAY ME
Replies: 2
Views: 2290

Re: Query - ONE OF YOU WILL BETRAY ME

Anyone?
by it's_a_mystery
September 13th, 2015, 2:36 pm
Forum: Queries
Topic: Query - ONE OF YOU WILL BETRAY ME
Replies: 2
Views: 2290

Query - ONE OF YOU WILL BETRAY ME

I'm not really feeling my query. I think it needs more voice and personality like in the MS. But the thing is, my MS is written in first-person point of view. This is a different genre than most on this forum. But hopefully you guys are willing to take a stab at it and see what it needs and what it ...