Nathan Bransford - The Forums

I don't know if the following would be grammatically correct, but it wouldn't sound bad as: The night deals a hand where murder, robbery, and all-around mayhem are in the cards. With it comes a path to redemption for Martin as he gambles with more than just money at The Reverie Casino . This way the...

Something that stuck out was the way she described how to fix a one-dimensional scene in your opening. She said: "Don’t make readers feel unwelcome. Be a good host and ease your reader into the party. Introduce them to someone interesting who will be only too happy to show them around the house...

Wow thanks for posting this. I'm storing it in my tool belt!