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by crittermonster
April 2nd, 2015, 2:35 pm
Forum: Queries
Topic: How's this query grab ya? NOBODY'S FOOL
Replies: 2
Views: 2108

How's this query grab ya? NOBODY'S FOOL

Which is better-- the long query or the short one?? (Short) Dear Mr. Bransford, With the passing of Sir Terry Pratchett, a great octarine light has gone out of the world, and his legion of fans are cast into the darkness. Maybe you can offer them a match: my 80,000 word comic fantasy NOBODY'S FOOL. ...
by crittermonster
March 31st, 2015, 11:34 pm
Forum: Excerpts
Topic: Anyone need help with writing about horses?
Replies: 1
Views: 2230

Anyone need help with writing about horses?

Hi all. I'm new here and in order to be a "good citizen" as Nathan suggests, may I offer my services in editing stuff to do with horses? Horses show up a lot. Historical, fantasy, Western. And sure, you might know all about 'em-- but what if you don't? Does that mean you have to clip-clop around the...
by crittermonster
March 31st, 2015, 9:54 pm
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: Nominate Your Query for a Critique on the Blog
Replies: 213
Views: 118659

Re: Nominate Your Query for a Critique on the Blog

Which is better-- the long query or the short one?? (Short) Dear Mr. Bransford, With the passing of Sir Terry Pratchett, a great octarine light has gone out of the world, and his legion of fans are cast into the darkness. Maybe you can offer them a match: my 80,000 word comic fantasy NOBODY'S FOOL. ...