Nathan Bransford - The Forums

I understood you, thanks. Apparently, I still do not have enough skill. I wanted to show off men and women. The little game. He pretends to be an innocent victim of circumstances, trying to catch the girl in his nets, and she is arrogant enough (or foolish or her lacks life experience) to realize th...

Hi longknife. Thanks for the comment.
Sorry, I am knew here - what means MC?
Do you think characters poorly described or I have some other problem?

A short sketch. I can leave as it is, but I thought - maybe it makes sense to continue the story? I would be grateful for advice, criticism and impressions. He sat down beside me in the cafe. - Not used? - Asked, and without waiting for an answer, plopped down on a chair. I looked down to a cup of c...