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by Anna Perry
March 30th, 2015, 8:38 am
Forum: Excerpts
Topic: Short story - Butterfly
Replies: 5
Views: 2296

Re: Short story - Butterfly

I understood you, thanks. Apparently, I still do not have enough skill. I wanted to show off men and women. The little game. He pretends to be an innocent victim of circumstances, trying to catch the girl in his nets, and she is arrogant enough (or foolish or her lacks life experience) to realize th...
by Anna Perry
March 28th, 2015, 5:59 pm
Forum: Excerpts
Topic: Short story - Butterfly
Replies: 5
Views: 2296

Re: Short story - Butterfly

Hi longknife. Thanks for the comment.
Sorry, I am knew here - what means MC?
Do you think characters poorly described or I have some other problem?
by Anna Perry
March 26th, 2015, 3:21 pm
Forum: Excerpts
Topic: Short story - Butterfly
Replies: 5
Views: 2296

Short story - Butterfly

A short sketch. I can leave as it is, but I thought - maybe it makes sense to continue the story? I would be grateful for advice, criticism and impressions. He sat down beside me in the cafe. - Not used? - Asked, and without waiting for an answer, plopped down on a chair. I looked down to a cup of c...