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by kacsimm
March 5th, 2015, 8:01 pm
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog
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Re: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog

Tittle: Alasdair Kain, DragonMarked YA Fantasy Pungent smoke polluted the air in the farmyard. Four-year-old Alasdair coughed weakly, a terrible heat swelling over his chest and face. He could not escape either the warmth, or the stench from the fire clinging to his hair and skin. Alasdair tugged hi...