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by MaryDuquette
September 4th, 2014, 9:00 pm
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: Nominate Your Query for a Critique on the Blog
Replies: 213
Views: 120134

Re: Nominate Your Query for a Critique on the Blog

Song of Cerberus Ingredients: • 1 cup cynical yet spirited woman, Susie, cuckolded; French chef and ineffective yogi • 1 tablespoon cheating husband, Richard, remorseful but complacent • 1 teaspoon lover of cheating husband, Dolores (or Dodo, as she is not-so-affectionately called) • 2 cups teenager...
by MaryDuquette
September 4th, 2014, 8:49 pm
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Replies: 720
Views: 282792

Re: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog

Title: Song of Cerberus Genre: Commercial/Upmarket Fiction Word count: 235 It wasn’t the Studebakers’ annual fall bash that made Susie feel like she had gum stuck in her hair. They were, after all, a couple who held semi-royalty status around town. No one declined an invitation to a Studebaker party...