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- August 27th, 2014, 1:21 pm
- Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
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Re: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Title: THE PAHALA TWIST Crime fiction Word count: 234 With an earsplitting “crack,” the papaya exploded. Seeds and pulp pelted a man called Waha Nui as his hand grabbed at empty air where the ripe fruit used to be. When a second shot clipped a small branch from the tree, he threw himself face-first ...