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by vldixon
September 19th, 2019, 6:12 pm
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: NEW - Nominate Your Query for a Critique on the Blog
Replies: 28
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Re: NEW - Nominate Your Query for a Critique on the Blog

Dear [Agent,] In a land where necromancers are reviled and the dead feared, Lord Liu Jie keeps a secret. The spirits of his dead follow and talk to him. When his nephew, the Emperor, summons Jie to civil war, his survival seems impossible. If he's not killed in battle, his secret may force his men t...
by vldixon
September 19th, 2019, 6:11 pm
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: NEW - Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Replies: 46
Views: 23394

Re: NEW - Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog

MOURN THEIR COURAGE Chapter 1 Inside the Peach Orchard Inn, Lord Liu Jie expected to be murdered. He appreciated that he had a choice in how it might happen. As to why it might happen, he reread the imperial notice posted behind the bar: "The Son of Heaven requires the aid of all men as sons might c...
by vldixon
August 26th, 2014, 9:21 pm
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Replies: 720
Views: 284747

Re: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog

Mourn Their Courage: A Romance of the Three Kingdoms Novel Lord Liu Jie looked at his 200 hungry recruits, sure they expected him to fill their bellies, end the drought and bring peace to the world. He stood on the inn’s first floor landing in his cotton robes and scholar’s cap as they toasted him i...