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by ryankalford
July 11th, 2014, 12:09 pm
Forum: Queries
Topic: Query for Recoded Volume I: Alan and Rachael
Replies: 2
Views: 1847

Re: Query for Recoded Volume I: Alan and Rachael

Hey guys. Just updating with a newer draft that's quite different from my previous. # Dani Redfield dreamed of a beach the night her parents fought. The sun warmed her face, unlike the fever that burned her body. The grey eyes had watched her there; staring in their scary way, frightening and alien ...
by ryankalford
July 9th, 2014, 3:37 am
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Replies: 720
Views: 283009

Re: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog

Title: Recoded Volume I: Alan and Rachael Genre: Social Sci-fi They walked along the steel corridors at a brisk pace, hand in hand. “Are you sure this is going to work,” Alyssa said, more than a hint of annoyance in her voice. “I mean—concerning me and your brother?” “Oh, I have no doubts, darling. ...
by ryankalford
July 9th, 2014, 3:24 am
Forum: Queries
Topic: Query for Recoded Volume I: Alan and Rachael
Replies: 2
Views: 1847

Query for Recoded Volume I: Alan and Rachael

Hey everyone! I'm a new member here seeking feedback on my query (obviously!). I've been going through the QueryShark archives, and had planned on critiquing here and a couple other forums before posting my own, but I've decided to take a class on querying from Litreactor.com that starts on the 21st...