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by meghanethompson
September 17th, 2014, 5:46 am
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Replies: 720
Views: 283241

Re: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog

Title: The Last Days of Mavornia Genre: Epic Fantasy (246 words) A slender boy with toughened green skin and hopeful black eyes watched as the village burned. He had come from Vardra with the army on a sacred mission and though he was only fourteen star cycles, he was certain today he would impress ...
by meghanethompson
June 24th, 2014, 6:00 am
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Replies: 720
Views: 283241

Re: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog

Title: The Last Days of Mavornia Genre: Epic Fantasy (257 words) A tiny girl, only eight star cycles old, knelt in the eaves of the Domchaum Temple. All around her, soldiers were pulling men from their homes. Women screamed and clutched for their husbands while holding tight to their sons. Flames fr...
by meghanethompson
April 3rd, 2014, 5:13 am
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Replies: 720
Views: 283241

Re: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog

A tiny girl, only eight star cycles old, knelt in the eaves of the Domchaum Temple. All around her, soldiers were pulling men from their homes. Women screamed and clutched at their husbands while holding tight to their sons. Flames from nearby farms slithered toward the village and terror spread fro...