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- August 26th, 2014, 8:02 pm
- Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
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Re: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Leo slammed down the phone. When that was not enough, he picked it up and threw it across the room, ripping the cord from the wall. Marcy jumped out of her typing chair and started backing toward the door. “Sorry,” he said. “Another deal went south. You may have to call that agency and tell them you...
- April 2nd, 2014, 7:04 pm
- Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
- Topic: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog
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Re: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog
On the day we were to be sold, they woke us at first light. The children huddling at my feet started to cry when the overseer prodded us with his stick. I tried to comfort them, but I was frightened too. When First We Met Fantasy Novel There were only ten of us now. Two girls and a boy had died on t...