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by cmarch
August 26th, 2014, 8:02 pm
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Replies: 720
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Re: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog

Leo slammed down the phone. When that was not enough, he picked it up and threw it across the room, ripping the cord from the wall. Marcy jumped out of her typing chair and started backing toward the door. “Sorry,” he said. “Another deal went south. You may have to call that agency and tell them you...
by cmarch
April 2nd, 2014, 7:04 pm
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Replies: 720
Views: 282997

Re: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog

On the day we were to be sold, they woke us at first light. The children huddling at my feet started to cry when the overseer prodded us with his stick. I tried to comfort them, but I was frightened too. When First We Met Fantasy Novel There were only ten of us now. Two girls and a boy had died on t...