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by 1swedishfish
February 22nd, 2014, 3:26 pm
Forum: Queries
Topic: BENEATH THE CYPRESS TREE Query help!
Replies: 2
Views: 2454

BENEATH THE CYPRESS TREE Query help!

Dear Agent, When 17-year-old Emma Rocklin moves to the mystical swamp town of Brentwood, Louisiana, where voodoo is law, she thinks the worst part about being the new girl is wrangling a spot on the cheer squad, garnering a homecoming nomination, and snagging the “it” guy. Instead, she is attacked a...
by 1swedishfish
February 22nd, 2014, 2:56 pm
Forum: Queries
Topic: Query: DEVIANT (YA urban fantasy)
Replies: 1
Views: 2056

Re: Query: DEVIANT (YA urban fantasy)

Dear (Agent), Invisible to the naked eye, the Haze flows harmlessly through the air. While it passes through most, there are those it gathers and thickens around who can harness its power—Deviants, the very people the governments of Earth have kept secret for centuries. 18-year-old Cal Espers is onl...
by 1swedishfish
February 22nd, 2014, 1:57 pm
Forum: Queries
Topic: Query: Unibeltrasia The Fallen Prince
Replies: 1
Views: 2187

Re: Query: Unibeltrasia The Fallen Prince

Needs some cleaning up. I am no expert, but here goes. Prince Tamiron Lluch, prince of the Trasidar Empire of the Far East, boldly betrays the empire without any explanation. (Totaling its army in one attack--doesn't make sense. Did Prince Lluch take out their army in one attack?) cleaner) Any subst...