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- January 13th, 2010, 4:56 pm
- Forum: Queries
- Topic: Query Critique - Annevra Waiting - YA fiction
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Re: Query Critique - Annevra Waiting - YA fiction
Wow, I realize now how much I need to take out my fancy way of saying she only saw visions of things that happened in the past xP It sounds like she saw Koda walking down the street a week before the Revolution--what I actually meant was those were two separate visions, both happening in the past, l...
- January 13th, 2010, 2:38 pm
- Forum: Queries
- Topic: Query Critique - Annevra Waiting - YA fiction
- Replies: 6
- Views: 3346
Query Critique - Annevra Waiting - YA fiction
Hey, hey, I'm new here. I need critiquing on my query letter, for a book I finished writing a couple months ago. Any and all advice is welcome :) Dear (Agent): Lucy Divine no longer expected to find out why she had visions. So what if she saw three minutes of the American Revolution, and five minute...