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by pr3ttivacant
January 13th, 2010, 4:56 pm
Forum: Queries
Topic: Query Critique - Annevra Waiting - YA fiction
Replies: 6
Views: 1363

Re: Query Critique - Annevra Waiting - YA fiction

Wow, I realize now how much I need to take out my fancy way of saying she only saw visions of things that happened in the past xP It sounds like she saw Koda walking down the street a week before the Revolution--what I actually meant was those were two separate visions, both happening in the past, l...
by pr3ttivacant
January 13th, 2010, 2:38 pm
Forum: Queries
Topic: Query Critique - Annevra Waiting - YA fiction
Replies: 6
Views: 1363

Query Critique - Annevra Waiting - YA fiction

Hey, hey, I'm new here. I need critiquing on my query letter, for a book I finished writing a couple months ago. Any and all advice is welcome :) Dear (Agent): Lucy Divine no longer expected to find out why she had visions. So what if she saw three minutes of the American Revolution, and five minute...