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- October 22nd, 2013, 5:42 pm
- Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
- Topic: Nominate Your Query for a Critique on the Blog
- Replies: 213
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Re: Nominate Your Query for a Critique on the Blog
Dear Nathan Bransford, Ever wake up with a vague feeling of unease that you can’t quite put your finger on? When your inner voice is screaming at you to be careful, for something is lurking in the shadows, stalking you. If it's Cendall, tell your loved ones goodbye, she’s about to check you off her ...
- October 21st, 2013, 11:28 pm
- Forum: Queries
- Topic: Query Help: Death has a daughter
- Replies: 3
- Views: 3450
Re: Query Help: Death has a daughter
Thank you for the feedback, here is my second attempt. :) Dear Agent, Ever wake up with a vague feeling of unease that you can’t quite put your finger on? When your inner voice is screaming at you to be careful, for something is lurking in the shadows, stalking you. Well that’s Cendall; tell your lo...
- October 19th, 2013, 2:08 pm
- Forum: Queries
- Topic: Query Help: Death has a daughter
- Replies: 3
- Views: 3450
Query Help: Death has a daughter
Updated query below** Dear Future Agent: Cendall, the only female grim reaper ever born, has just finished training, turned sixteen, and been handed her scroll of human souls to collect. None of her training could have prepared her for the first soul on her list named Lacie though. She's protected b...