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- November 17th, 2013, 9:20 pm
- Forum: Queries
- Topic: STRINGS OF FATE-Any advice?
- Replies: 3
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Re: STRINGS OF FATE-Any advice?
That was so helpful! Thank you both!!
- October 9th, 2013, 4:23 pm
- Forum: Queries
- Topic: Query for In Death
- Replies: 2
- Views: 3534
Re: Query for In Death
"NEVER QUOTE YOUR BOOK! Is that why this is in italics? If so, I would take it out of italics. Falling for a dead guy isn’t part of Santana Jones’ plans take out, but John Braver, the incredibly charming and incredibly dead politician on the other side of the mirror, makes it really hard not to...
- October 9th, 2013, 4:18 pm
- Forum: Queries
- Topic: YA Sci-Fi Fantasy: Satellite Hearts
- Replies: 5
- Views: 4867
Re: YA Sci-Fi Fantasy: Satellite Hearts
I really like this query--I remember seeing it on agentqueryconnect. But let me say this. The first line could use some work. Kamikaze is a bit strong of a word, and it gives off the idea that the rest will be about Japanese suicide. Plus, it's hard to say. Reading it in my mind, it didn't make a lo...
- October 9th, 2013, 4:13 pm
- Forum: Queries
- Topic: STRINGS OF FATE-Any advice?
- Replies: 3
- Views: 3422
STRINGS OF FATE-Any advice?
This is my first day on the forums, so I'd like to say hi:) So here is my query for STRINGS OF FATe. Any ideas would be useful:D Dear (Agent Name Here): Lila Marbles is a Grecian Fate who just wants to bake cookies. Unfortunately for snarky eighteen-year-old Lila, that doesn’t seem like it’s in her ...