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by raminthethick
September 24th, 2013, 9:53 pm
Forum: Connect With a Critique Partner
Topic: Need Critique on my resubmit for showing rather than telling
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Need Critique on my resubmit for showing rather than telling

I am completely at a loss. I got a resubmit email from a publisher today. They said my crime fiction novel was very intriguing. They said their was too much telling for their liking so I needed to edit and resubmit. I can spot telling in somebody else's novel but not so much my own. I live in Indian...