Nathan Bransford - The Forums

After many weeks of work, and having the obstacle of me writing in Hebrew and having all my work translated(Including the query, which makes it harder to make) I came down to this version which I will start sending to agents. It's really important for me to know what do you think about it, and if th...

I know that getting a critique is more likely to happen if you were on the forum for some time, and helped somebody else, but as i'm from Israel, my English is at a level not suited for that :( . The book is translated, but the query, until i know it is the final version, is written by me. so if you...