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by Aviv Shvitzky
August 22nd, 2013, 8:14 am
Forum: Queries
Topic: SHYNN & THE ELEMENTS: CHARGING THE KIRIN (YA Epic Fantasy)
Replies: 2
Views: 1486

Re: SHYNN & THE ELEMENTS: CHARGING THE KIRIN (YA Epic Fantasy)

After many weeks of work, and having the obstacle of me writing in Hebrew and having all my work translated(Including the query, which makes it harder to make) I came down to this version which I will start sending to agents. It's really important for me to know what do you think about it, and if th...
by Aviv Shvitzky
August 12th, 2013, 11:28 am
Forum: Queries
Topic: SHYNN & THE ELEMENTS: CHARGING THE KIRIN (YA Epic Fantasy)
Replies: 2
Views: 1486

SHYNN & THE ELEMENTS: CHARGING THE KIRIN (YA Epic Fantasy)

I know that getting a critique is more likely to happen if you were on the forum for some time, and helped somebody else, but as i'm from Israel, my English is at a level not suited for that :( . The book is translated, but the query, until i know it is the final version, is written by me. so if you...