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by Robin Murarka
July 30th, 2013, 5:17 am
Forum: Queries
Topic: Looking for feedback on my query letter.
Replies: 3
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Re: Looking for feedback on my query letter.

Hi Kristina, One comment I can say off the bat is that I think you are using semi-colons too much. Then through a small twist of fate; my brother (Leonard) and I went from poverty to luxury overnight. Our mother returned to us; in the arms of a wealthy man. For example. I've read that when it comes ...