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by PerryStroika
April 21st, 2013, 11:35 pm
Forum: Queries
Topic: Upper MG Fantasy
Replies: 4
Views: 3893

Re: Upper MG Fantasy

Eric Ortega’s pissed when he wakes up missing all sorts of important memories, like every single memory of his mother. His sister explains that a cacodemon had taken over his body, and the immortal beings in the town of Birch Stew had helped him. First off, who are these immortal beings? Gods? Spir...
by PerryStroika
April 21st, 2013, 11:06 pm
Forum: Queries
Topic: Query: THE GREAT TURBULENCE AND MALCONTENT OF BRIMLEY TINDER
Replies: 4
Views: 4997

Re: Query: THE GREAT TURBULENCE AND MALCONTENT OF BRIMLEY TINDER

In 1665 London, Brimley Tinderbuss writes sharp criticisms of King Charles II's tax-heavy reign. My first reaction to this is to wonder what "write" means. Does he write for a paper? Or write letters or what? Who does he write for? Eventually in the second paragraph, you let it drop that he posts h...
by PerryStroika
April 21st, 2013, 10:41 pm
Forum: Queries
Topic: Query, let me know
Replies: 12
Views: 5331

Re: Query, let me know

In my humble opinion this could be considerably slimmed down. When William Chenette and Bradley Pinard are killed in a drunk driving accident after their high school graduation, the small town of Lafayette, Vermont is left reeling. Especially devastated are their four closest childhood friends, Dan ...