I'm going to revise it & not include some names & report!
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- February 13th, 2013, 1:12 pm
- Forum: Queries
- Topic: My Query for The Elements (Book I)
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Great concept but the query is somewhat wordy . Try to streamline it to around 250 words. It is also confusing because you have too many names in the text. Using double spaces between your paragraphs will make it a little easier to read Thanks so much. I think you're right. I do need to space it bu...