Nathan Bransford - The Forums

I've just done an updated version of above (the red text is the new stuff). But now perhaps I am giving them information overload. Dear Ms. Name I am querying you as I admire the fact that you took a risk in supporting a first-time author when you recognised talent. I think you would be a good fit f...

Wow! Thank you both so much for your feedback, it really is invaluable :) I've taken both of your suggestions on board. I'd really appreciate if you could look at the updated version below. Also what cvalue do you think a personalised paragraph at the start has? for example at the start of this leet...

Hi All! I'm new here and promise to give some feedback on other queries. Below is my first attempt at a query for my YA novel After The Closing: The Voice. Any feedback would be appreciated. Don't be afraid to be harsh! Thanks :) Date Agents Name Agent Address Dear Ms. Name (Insert Personal Tidbit) ...